The increase in
oil prices which partly due to the military conflict tension between US and
Iran has worsened the current global economy recessions. If the attempt of US
to prevent Iran from developing nuclear weapons fails, it is likely military
action will have to act on to stop Iran
which will further spike in oil prices. This has increases the worrying as the
global recessions prior to 2008, were also caused by the geopolitical tensions
in the Middle East that resulting in a sharp spike in oil prices. Despite the
global growth in economy slowdown, the price of the oil had already achieve
$100/barrel. According to the economist, the price will go even higher, even if
no military conflict takes place.
The increase in oil prices which (^) partly due to the military /conflict tension (Delete one of these words)/ between US and Iran has worsened the current global economy(Word form) recessions(word form). If the attempt of (^) US to prevent Iran from developing nuclear weapons fails, it is likely military action will have to /act on (wrong words)/ to stop Iran which will further spike in(Delete) oil prices. This has increases(Verb form) /the worrying(?)/ as the global recessions prior to 2008, were also caused by the geopolitical tensions in the Middle East that resulting(Word form) in a sharp spike in oil prices. Despite the global /growth in economy slowdown(rephrase)/, the price of the oil had already achieve(wrong word) $100/barrel. According to the economist(Which one?), the price will go even higher, even if no military conflict takes place.
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